2024-25 SATW Foundation Lowell Thomas Travel Journalism Competition

118 Personal Comment ( All) Back

  • Place Name: First Place
    Contestant Name: Justin Fornal
    Entry Title: What I Learned Chewing the Stimulant Khat Across Three Countries
    Entry Credit: Justin Fornal
    Judge Comment: Justin Fornal’s essay could seem to be a travel writer’s party trick: Go to the Arabian Peninsula and the Horn of Africa to partake in a time-honored social ritual. But this is no party trick. Chewing on the intoxicating leaves of khat, Fornal takes his readers on a surprising journey linked to centuries past and with an immediate connection to today’s global issues and humans’ long search for solace, comfort and community in troubled times.
  • Place Name: Second Place
    Contestant Name: Mariel Wamsley
    Entry Title: An Elegy for Crystal Cove, Our Family’s Piece of Paradise
    Entry Credit: Joan Bregstein
    Judge Comment: From childhood through adulthood, Joan Bregstein treasured the one-bedroom, tropical condo her parents bought in the 1960s. Bregstein fashions a cinematic story beginning in an age without sunscreen. She portrays life at a vacation retreat that’s replete with iguanas, tennis courts, a saltwater pool and a white sand beach, overlooking the absurdly blue Caribbean. Yet over the decades this transformed into what she calls “its own type of burden” as she writes intimately about a family’s joys and deep sorrows.
  • Place Name: Third Place
    Contestant Name: John Penner
    Entry Title: A total eclipse is more than a spectacle. So I’m on the road to see it — again
    Entry Credit: John Penner
    Judge Comment: Invoking ancient astronomers, the Bible, Milton, Shakespeare, Annie Dillard and Ray Bradbury, Los Angeles Times writer John Penner probes the depths of humanity and his own awe with eclipses of the sun and moon. With an explanatory approach to describe the science behind the wonders of eclipses, Penner helps us see and feel what leads him to chase across the continent to document an on-the-ground yet still up-close look at a solar eclipse.
  • Place Name: Honorable Mention
    Contestant Name: Caroline Van Hemert
    Entry Title: The fleet-winged ghosts of Greenland
    Entry Credit: Caroline Van Hemert
    Judge Comment: Biologist Caroline Van Hemert describes herself as a “falcon fangirl.” Her reportage from the polar realms of Greenland makes clear that she is the perfect guide to help illuminate the precarious environmental factors that endanger the fastest of birds whose “routes…arc like spaghetti across the globe.” She issues an alert “that the rarest of the rare may once again become blessedly common – if we care enough to act quickly.”